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The title? Because its a cool word. owo and I have the power.

This is me putting off *GymnasticsGirl104's request. ^^;

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:icongymnasticsgirl104:
oooh kaori-chan i LOVE this one!! the first thing that struck me was her pretty hair. it's so sleek and pretty, i love it. no crits there, nope.

the only thing i wish to point out is the shading on her top. i'd just be a little more careful, the shadow between her breasts is off. it should gradually get darker as it goes further in, you have it getting lighter and darker as it goes out. i'd also fade it a little instead of abruptly stopping. this way it would look more natural instead of quickly done. oh, and also, the shading on her left arm doesn't match up with the shading on her sleeve. the shadows and highlights are in the wrong place.

oh and i meant to point this out at the beginning. i love her bright eyes! they stand out very well. great job, she's very beautiful.

i don't really like rating things...so i just gave u 5 stars on everything. cause i luv ya XD
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:icongymnasticsgirl104:
oh and do u want me to make a different request? u already got me a sub i don't need a really complicated drawing too.

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The number of times I give up and the number of failures were the same.
The data that can be derived
from this unpleasant experience,
proves that the number of times that I didn't give up and the number of times I succeed were the same.
:iconrisika93:
No, lol. It's fine. ^^ I'll get to it. :] and I'll work really hard. I promise.

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"People who live on hills live so close to the stars, they forget those of us who live too much on earth." ~ The House On Mango Street
:iconsludgepilot:
Not too bad. A little skinny, and the outer lines could use thickening... but otherwise, a descent pic.
Keep it up!
:iconrisika93:
Thanks so much! ^^ I'll consider those with future works, definitely.

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"People who live on hills live so close to the stars, they forget those of us who live too much on earth." ~ The House On Mango Street
:iconsludgepilot:
Cool. I'm sure you'll improve with an attitude like that as well! :D
:iconrisika93:
I love criticism. ^^; If people only tell me what great work I did, I don't know what to improve on.

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"People who live on hills live so close to the stars, they forget those of us who live too much on earth." ~ The House On Mango Street
:iconsludgepilot:
I agree! I don't get enough either!
:iconrisika93:
I could critique some of your work, if you'd like. ^^ I got time. :3

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"People who live on hills live so close to the stars, they forget those of us who live too much on earth." ~ The House On Mango Street
:iconsludgepilot:
I'd appreciate your comments! :D

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