Restraint

oooh kaori-chan i LOVE this one!! the first thing that struck me was her pretty hair. it's so sleek and pretty, i love it. no crits there, nope.

the only thing i wish to point out is the shading on her top. i'd just be a little more careful, the shadow between her breasts is off. it should gradually get darker as it goes further in, you have it getting lighter and darker as it goes out. i'd also fade it a little instead of abruptly stopping. this way it would look more natural instead of quickly done. oh, and also, the shading on her left arm doesn't match up with the shading on her sleeve. the shadows and highlights are in the wrong place.

oh and i meant to point this out at the beginning. i love her bright eyes! they stand out very well. great job, she's very beautiful.

i don't really like rating things...so i just gave u 5 stars on everything. cause i luv ya XD